ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
Once as a little blond haired girl-child
with blue and dreaming eyes,
fair future far away I wanted,
like fairytales weren’t lies.
Today where am I; I’m here below
the surface and the skies.
I’m swimming deeply lost and lonely,
though spirit upward flies.
Near murky bottom, slimy inlet
I hear the blond girl’s cries.
I catch my breath above with cold air;
crisp love my heart denies.
Afraid of showing all that’s hidden,
though selfish conscience tries.
On currents cold of air and water
mired spirals lusting rise.
What if suddenly I want to stop,
answer those how’s and why’s;
could I not be filled with worry that
truth would be love’s demise.
with blue and dreaming eyes,
fair future far away I wanted,
like fairytales weren’t lies.
Today where am I; I’m here below
the surface and the skies.
I’m swimming deeply lost and lonely,
though spirit upward flies.
Near murky bottom, slimy inlet
I hear the blond girl’s cries.
I catch my breath above with cold air;
crisp love my heart denies.
Afraid of showing all that’s hidden,
though selfish conscience tries.
On currents cold of air and water
mired spirals lusting rise.
What if suddenly I want to stop,
answer those how’s and why’s;
could I not be filled with worry that
truth would be love’s demise.
we all hide something, somewhere.
© 2006 - 2024 relativecosmicmusing
Comments9
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Excelent structure. The flow is wonderful.
I do not know if I am right but I see insecurity in this. A fear of giving part of oneself to someone (or anyone) for fear of what might happen. Perhaps experience has forced them to think like that. The words "I love you" replaced by "I destroy you". Looking back there almost seems to be that feeling running through quite alot of your work, parhaps some more latent than others. Or perhaps I am wrong.
I do not know if I am right but I see insecurity in this. A fear of giving part of oneself to someone (or anyone) for fear of what might happen. Perhaps experience has forced them to think like that. The words "I love you" replaced by "I destroy you". Looking back there almost seems to be that feeling running through quite alot of your work, parhaps some more latent than others. Or perhaps I am wrong.