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sometime fears
slice half-hazardly the balance
sometime anguish
locks down quiet anticipation
crimson want spills
encircling me entirely
jaundiced with faults
etched deeply in the past
anytime sparks
slower pulses time
anytime looks
faster ignites flame
blue like circles
capturing me softly
white like water
rushing through my dreams
everytime risings
spoken in passioned tongue
everytime softenings
mirrored embers lighting eyes
days fading … more days
sharply engraving need
tomorrows become yesterday
hurrying past without remorse
11.10.06
slice half-hazardly the balance
sometime anguish
locks down quiet anticipation
crimson want spills
encircling me entirely
jaundiced with faults
etched deeply in the past
anytime sparks
slower pulses time
anytime looks
faster ignites flame
blue like circles
capturing me softly
white like water
rushing through my dreams
everytime risings
spoken in passioned tongue
everytime softenings
mirrored embers lighting eyes
days fading … more days
sharply engraving need
tomorrows become yesterday
hurrying past without remorse
11.10.06
always thinking ... more thinking ... 
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Some interesting imagry in this 
"Jaundiced with faults etched deeply in the past". Everytime the past is remembered, it is with some distain, some regret. It watches you with glazed eyes, weezing, dying, but never forgetting.
"Jaundiced with faults etched deeply in the past". Everytime the past is remembered, it is with some distain, some regret. It watches you with glazed eyes, weezing, dying, but never forgetting.